Sponson Light

As for coloring, dont use one color and a different shade, nothing is ever just lighter or darker. If a red light is shown on her, add some red highlights, ...

Really? I have a 5 year old ball-tracker on a 2 year old mouse pad, and its fine. And Im not exagerating, I hate buying new crap for my computer. ...

Sweet job, nice style, but her legs look a bit twisted. Also you have shakey lines, which detract. (No, even without a tablet you can make strait/smooth lines)

Analyze the stuff, pho sho! Read the people, not the comic. Thats why I havent even said a name yet. Because unneeded things get in the way. Plus I want ...

Make like a trailer or something, those always make people want to see your stuff, and you can usually get the general consensus.

Thats just...confusing. try rereading from the start, frame by frame. This isnt a manga where its just "strait foward". I like things that set up the future, far into the ...

Yay pilot~!

Does anyone here actually watch this? From yesterday.

Ye olde writing.... actually fine I know its spelt young but I keep making that stupid mistake of the e. younge.... blarg! BLARG

The hair looks messy. Yeah... and the eye's perspective is weird. But thats just me, but the hair is messy.

Ill probably clean up the lines or something, then color it. What do you think? Add/Sub? 5 mins or something to make this, Ill scrap it without a hitch.